Thursday, November 4, 2010

Awake Comments

Rating: 2.8

Foolish heart of mine
Why did you doubted thine?
He is one of a kind
But still you left Him behind
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Mark louie Cañete
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Gillena Cox 26 January 2012

interesting read; i suppose love being a divine quality exists always

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Gillena Cox 19 November 2010

a profound message written an interesting rhyming style

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Mohammad Muzzammil 18 November 2010

Really nice poem which is worthy to be read and praised. You've presented your poem in a good way. Your language is simple but message is great. Nice to read it.

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Edmund Calleja 04 November 2010

Very deep thoughts which are accompanied by good rhymes.

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