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It takes one thought to begin a dream
Reality and fantasy together to form a team
Some of this and some of that, it is clear
Acting upon each other, with nothing to fear
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Analytical though the last line is confusing me a little...nice theme10
WOW! ..It takes one thought to begin a dream Reality and fantasy together to form a team.. Great tablet indeed to cure ample people suffering with ailment from unfulfilled dream. 10+++
Very short, but yet a confidence poem that we will keep on living and need to live and not cower
The journey of life leads in many directions. This is a lovely piece Deborah, very well written. Best wishes, Andrew
It takes one thought to begin a dream Very nice -- and it takes one thought to create your works Very Good 10+
very musical and moving great write Deb :)
A thought is like a dot.. it converges to make a whole thing! Very inspirational!
Reality n fantasy to mingle For the soul to merrily jingle for your face to bathe in glow In evry moment frm high 2 low
a poem is born a theory enunciated a song sung, a sonnet forgotten just termini of thought….. it meanders; moves forms new ruts irrigate new lands sauté hearts anew and sing new songs thought moves on
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7/23/2025 10:12:26 PM # 1.0.0
Nice rythmn and rhyming. Dreams we have do reflect our lives, I prefer to live in present time, and reflect on how life is going.