Friday, January 23, 2009

Awake Comments

Rating: 4.3

Night has awakened with its
rustling claws; searing shearing;
meager remnants of sleep
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Rehan Hyder
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Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

wonderful complex metaphor ''Last of fires from your shoulders where my head had rested once offered some hope to wrest out winter from the frozen lines of fate '' embedded in a wonderful poem...10++

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Viola Grey 10 May 2009

wow...the darkness here is simply gorgeous...and I love love love the third stanza...excellent write my friend.

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 02 February 2009

'perhaps nights always have the last laugh' Wah Wah! ... excellent.tasteful a gem glistening in the dark of night.

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