Sunday, January 13, 2013

Awaiting The Ghost Of Christopher Gape Comments

Rating: 5.0

The cold October chill breeze fills the air.
Branches hang loose, sway listless, side to side.
Fully aware of the cold, cold days ahead,
They sway forlornly, aged and withered, died.
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Sally Plumb Plumb 31 January 2013

You sure conjured up a mood.(i wish I could write at length)

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Valerie Dohren 13 January 2013

Awesome, very atmospheric - an excellent write, very well penned.

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Romeo Della Valle 13 January 2013

Impressive! A very well crafted and awesome write! I read it a few time and I really liked it! Especially the ending stanza Towards the moment I fear the most of all. My heart pounds thump, thump, thump as I await The arrival of the ghost of Christopher Gape Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City.

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