Friday, May 5, 2006

Awaiting Sunshine. Comments

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I'm in a world that isn't there
At least not there for me
What is it that I'm lacking
That I can't see what others see
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Graham Jones
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Brian Dorn 18 May 2006

Graham, certainly the end explains the somber tone of the poem and, of course, the nature of the title. An excellent write! ! Brian

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Ernestine Northover 05 May 2006

Graham this is beautiful and so very sad. A wonderful read, I love your poems. Love Ernestine XXX

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