Friday, March 16, 2012

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Rating: 5.0

I close my eyes 
And see him looming 
Black and endless
Staring, staring in the night 
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Annabel Cruz
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Kelly Seale 05 August 2012

This is an amazing piece Annable! Your analogy and imagery are so vivid and stirring. This is the sort of poem that stays with you...long after you're gone. Great Ink! -Kelly.

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Annabel Cruz

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