Awaiting Love. Comments

You most certainly portrayed the feelings of love very well. This poem has a flowy sense to it, I like it.

Excellent Fay- this delivers on all levels. The flow is great, the message of opening up and embracing love, the style...you are a truly great writer 10/10

love is a ffeling beyond words but u proved that words are stronger enough to bring out the essense of love 10

Marvellous writing Fay.The worst thing about love is when having captured it, in all its forms, then dispensed with it knowingly is a numbing of the soul.Waiting to re-capture its essence is a painful process and seems impossible when you have been deeply wounded in love. Sid xx.

Gentle, introspective, filled with kindness and warmth. True poetry is ageless. Write on by all means. As always, Sandra

fay, your poems move me every time i read them and this one locked me down you are truly gifted.10++

Some times we need to reach out for that understanding hand.. Andrew 10

Beautiful poem written with an open heart. We must be open to love and take the risk, the first courageous step.

You have gripped well the sublime power of love in this beautiful poem.A 10!

prepare, heart wet kind and soft ready to grow flowering cherishable love...good message, Fay...a good poem written in free flowing poetic lines...10

ma'am your writting is smooth and beautifful which transforms the words into the dreams, fantasies and imaginations. i loved your poem speccialy these lines...least i can give is 10....thanks Darkly wrapping ourselves in lonliness, Withdrawing inside a wearisome heart

Awaiting Love It reminds me of shakespearean sonnetts but far more accessable as you indicate there is always hope jim

A marvelous poem on love. Lovely.10+

Don't lighten up for me love you the way you are and for love just like me fickle old thing top marks lady 10 CHRIS