Wednesday, December 24, 2008

Awaiting Judgement Comments

Rating: 3.7

My courage, like the larks, has taken flight;
May God save me from this dreadful plight-

I had rose to the sky on angel's wings,
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Leslie Ching
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Michael Nkwocha 24 March 2009

waow, this is so inspiring and beautiful. really we know not what judgement brings, yet we await it. very beautiful poem Leslie. keep it up.10 plus

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Michael P. Johnson 31 January 2009

Walk with Jesus The Living Christ my friend until the very end. Have no fear Salvation through faith is here

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*Trusting You* 25 December 2008

My courage, like the larks, has taken flight; May God save me from this dreadful plight- great lines... you did a very nice job in rhyming this in some parts. this a very mature poem for your age. Becca

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Autumn Stoddard 25 December 2008

The words used madew this poem captivating, and vivid. As always, you provide us with a good read.

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Fiona Davidson 25 December 2008

Brilliant perception Lesley..beautifully written...thanks for sharing it...

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Leslie Ching

Leslie Ching

Toronto, ON, Canada
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