Sunday, February 8, 2009

Awaiting Her Valentine. Comments

Rating: 5.0

In a hidden golden land
Beyond the rainbow, standing
Only a hearbeat away,
There lives a smitten lady
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Fay Slimm
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Tsira Goge 08 February 2009

Fay, very beautiful expectation of the prince...10....... Tsira

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 February 2009

They'll be lining up after such sweet lines fay.. :) 10

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Fiona Davidson 08 February 2009

This really touches my heart Fay...so beautiful...thank you..Fi...10++

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Tia Maria 08 February 2009

Oh Fay, only you could write this way... another very special message of eternal love ... and thank you, I went into my own little fairytale :) xx

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Kris Smith 08 February 2009

That was a beautiful piece of romantic verse Fay hope he arrives safely and on time 10 ++ Chris

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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