Awa Odori Comments

Nice poem! Sounds interesting! I wish I could visit Japan someday

this poem wakes up in the readers mind a sense of excitement, bringing the sounds of a festival almost audibly to our ears. well done!

Fine thoughts penned beautifully! ......10+++

a happy one, good, we need that from time to time....

I enjoyed the world of excitement potrayed there in Awa Odori.

Very well done Ahmad, you feel almost there... Andrew 10

short but rich nice is small like us as human as a small one nice work sir could you plis if oneday you travel around the world tell me and i will accompany thank sir

I wish I am there. well written........10

well written poem! I enjoy reading it.

a nice one! Simply Awa Odori rgds

Though this entire poem consists of only twenty-five words, they are quite well-chosen and very effective one, Amhad. Your brief poem told it's tale wonderfully well, and depicted this Japanese festival quite beautifully. Carl.

You have painted in this poem a lovely picture of a delightfully inviting place! Thanks for sharing! *10*! Friend Thad

nice, festivity. at festivals, we share rare camradrie, and overcome our differences. Mamta

this a good poem friends

good composition, pretty interesting.

Its flows nicely, good....

Sounds good to me, nice flow to this piece, well done, Lynda

I feel like joining the dance after going thro' this poem.

nice poem day night singing dancing keep sharing regards anju