Friday, December 5, 2008

Avoiding Unravelled Love. Comments

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Can anyone, anywhere ever repair
These dilatory habits of tearing?

Who deserves to be forever unheard
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Fay Slimm
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Kris Smith 13 December 2008

Beautiful words from a warm and sentient heart carefully formed and put to verse, top write 10+++++ Chris+++

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Fay Slimm 08 December 2008

Glad you think this is so very true Rachael - - and thank you for your comments. - - Fay.

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Lynda Robson 05 December 2008

Good write Fay, I think we have to work at relationships or neglect can lead to an 'unravelling of love' as you say, 10 Lynda xx

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Fay Slimm

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