I keep
Diving deeper
And deeper...
To avoid
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This is amazing! The title captures interest, the format is appropriate, and the poem is so true. Nice job! :)
Amazing. This is a lot like my poem The Edge is near. Feeling like your falling and lost without help is a hard thing to deal with but it will pass and you have to approach it and stop it.
(Keep Avoidence to Violence The best way to get peace) A good poem! !
Brings to mind- The furthur you tunnel away from your problems, the deeper they'll bury you. Good poem. Straight forward. Never shy away from your humility.