Tuesday, May 14, 2013

Avoid-Aholic Comments

Rating: 4.4

The workaholic
works twelve hours a day
then rushes home
and squanders all his pay
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Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet
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Brian Jani 26 May 2014

Well penned poem

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 18 May 2013

great work Allen... a nice truth of life..

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Aldrich Suarez 18 May 2013

A lesson within your poem.....I like it....yeahbsolutely! : D

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Scotty Dogg 16 May 2013

I voted 9. Pretty darned good!

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Buxton Shippy 15 May 2013

The truth from a poet's pen. I voted 9/10 for this...

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Owain Glyn 14 May 2013

It depends on whether you work to live, or, live to work. The boundaries are easily corroded.

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Nader Baheri 14 May 2013

great work.with clear subject and the message.working is a liquor for a workaholic person.we need to work to earn money but there are always something more than working.~nb

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