Monday, September 3, 2007

Avid Feelings... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tender love filled my senses
Longing thirst, in air it vanished
Hearts collided with a rhythm so right
Insistent desires filled a long lost trial
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Joanna Kantharia
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Shelley L Baxter-stanley 09 September 2007

Hmmmm an interesting read with Great imagery and a feeling which carries the reader through with a ((Smile)) on their face! Whatever it is a dream or not I so enjoyed this poem Joanna. 10/10! =Take care of U =Shelley=

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Joanna Kantharia

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Ahmedabad, India
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