Monday, November 24, 2008

Avenue Comments

Rating: ★5.0

(dedicated to Missy Melita, a poet friend at poemhunter)

I sail until Gibraltar
Through fire, ice, tornado
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
destiny fire
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Sherif Monem 06 December 2008

It builds on new ideas but short.

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 04 December 2008

Thanks for sharing.I likke reading this.

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Stephanie Fiddy 03 December 2008

Its very interesting and pleasing! :)

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 03 December 2008

Very laconic and beautifully said!

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C T Heart 02 December 2008

The avenues of fate, destined to chaste. Life's sweet taste, slashing in my mind's embrace. Compact yet avery nice piece to ponder at. a 10.

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Little Morning Star 30 November 2008

short and nicely written poem, great job..

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Kite Remedy 27 November 2008

Walking with vision of marvelous scenery.. Nice writings..

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Lynda Robson 26 November 2008

I enjoyed reading this, nice imagery, 10 Lynda xx

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Joseph Poewhit 25 November 2008

Has some nice illusions of visions

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 24 November 2008

A beautiful poem...Black balloons flew into dew...What a wonderful line is this...I wonder who is going to accompany you!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
Ahmad Shiddiqi
Ahmad Shiddiqi
Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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