Avarice Comments

There are no pockets in a shroud for a reason, in the afterlife money is worthless.

Well written. True and genuine lesson. I enjoyed thoroughly. Go on. Thanks. anjandev roy.

The poem tone is not positive. You show the growth of boy to man. A boy taught the wrong things. If we live seeking wealth only. We will miss the good things. I liked the hardness and the honest words written.

The only time a man thinks not much of money when @ 14 he becomes a grown up lad and experinces lvelier things then as time wears him out goes back to the fray I want now money even if we don't take a penny ut our better halves cannot do without it love is dried up now like dew they want thei due so love of money grew but nwwomen wok too so love half money only balnce we all know what 'tis

A refined poetic imagination, Irshad. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

I feel honored dear Irshad Tantry to get the invitation to read your first poem posted on Poem Hunter.I am also grateful to Daniel Brick who referred my name to you.Poem Hunter is a great Site You will meet great poets, great critics, great friends and great people with kind hearts.Welcome to Poem Hunter. You will surely find it interesting. Your poem is a wonderful poem with nice flow of words.Man runs after money.But one day he will die and not a penny will go with him.It is an irony that in spite of knowing this, man still hankers after wealth.

An interesting write. I encourage you to continue. The more you write the better you get and you will get great enjoyment.

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth in good rhyme scheme with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing Irshad and do remain blessed.

Salam Irshad Thank you so much for seeking my advice. I am not that professional critic of poetry; but your work is mature. The idea is clear and poetic with great wisdom and teaching. Go on man, you are on the right track. Thanks for sharing.

I enjoyed reading your poem... At your age, you already have a potential in creating poem... I will give you a ten.....