Marching down high altitude
Engulfed by white solitude
Avalanches of snow pile upon
The aching part of the lonely soul
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Clever use of metaphors to express your loneliness. Very nice.
A picturesque poem.You have well penned down the feeling of loneliness.A good work.Keep it up.
A refined poetic imagination, Fasika. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.