Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Avalanches Of Solitude Comments

Rating: 4.5

Marching down high altitude
Engulfed by white solitude
Avalanches of snow pile upon
The aching part of the lonely soul
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Fasika Ayalew
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Jazib Kamalvi 16 November 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Fasika. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 March 2016

Clever use of metaphors to express your loneliness. Very nice.

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Fabrizio Frosini 02 February 2016

sent an email Cheers

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Alem Hailu G/kristos 30 November 2015

A picturesque poem.You have well penned down the feeling of loneliness.A good work.Keep it up.

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Fasika Ayalew

Fasika Ayalew

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