Friday, February 15, 2019

Avalanche Comments

Rating: 5.0

Looks like we are in the coldest winter
With ice peaks of chilly greed everywhere.
But soon an eternal spring of wisdom
Will make greed crash like a huge avalanche
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Aniruddha Pathak 27 February 2019

Looks like we are in the coldest winter With ice peaks of chilly greed everywhere.... Looks like, you are pretty concerned about the all-round greed in the world we live in. If so, we think alike. I too have a few pieces on the subject, a recurring theme I liked what I read.

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Valsa George 27 February 2019

A poem full of hope and positive vibes! Let us believe that the avalanche of hatred and animosity will melt by the warmth of love and consideration and a new era of peace and amity will dawn for mankind as winter will yield way to spring! Great thoughts! A 10

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Mj Lemon 16 February 2019

This is the greatest hope for the future there is. I think everyone on the planet is actually 'green.' We need to stop and consider what kind of 'green.' This a superb verse. It goes to myfavourites.

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