Monday, July 20, 2015

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Rating: 4.5

We enter dorms and ballroom astound,
Where human love has stained white gowns,
Glitter suits judge while I hide frowns.
Gravity hurts when I'm falling down.
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Meriam Joseph
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David Olusanya 26 July 2015

This is beautiful and fascinating.........I love the simplicity the poem is enveloped in. The structure is also consistent..............its wonderful

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Charlie Brooks 25 July 2015

man this is dope, write some more with this awesome structure

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