Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Autumn's March Comments

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At sunset the fiery sky rebels
into gray.
The clouds become stained
with orange, fighting the approaching dark.
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Smoky Hoss
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Chris Blazo 02 October 2012

Great imagery! I like the wait of death and it's acceptance.

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Joseph Anderson 18 September 2012

Sobering, but the way you expressed times onward march seems to be the better way. Time will win and nothing will change that. Hope you are not planning any early departure. I find this even soothing

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Dave Walker 18 September 2012

A beautiful poem, like it, really calming.

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Heather Wilson 12 September 2012

A poem for thought, I love the, barefoot and happy, heading towards heaven.

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Valerie Dohren 12 September 2012

I guess time is marching on for all of us while w e sit and watch - very poignant write Smoky, great.

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