Scorching sun may
Push us to stop and turn
In pricking hot sand
Our feet might burn
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:) ... yeah this do sounds very optimistic... it seems as if it is in answer to my 'Lost soul'? ? ? ? ... :) liked the optimistic approach.. read mine 'dawn'
i simply love to read whatever you write, such a relief from very weight vocabulary...very sweet and serene poem.. 10 for u