Autumnal Mind Comments

Today my mind strays away; dead, Into the forest dim quiet, With soundless depth it dissolves, Mind becomes forest in Autumn....................... Beautifully put! Autumn is at once a season of fruitfulness and decay and you have combined a sense of joy with a sense of melancholy in this lovely poem!

On the viewless wings Of seasonal bloom, Your footprint is felt, O Master divine with love... very poetic my dear friend Prabir. poems flow from your poetic mind. tony

In this vagrant joy... Of honeyed pain Here and there finding meaning... Of life Today my mind strays away; dead, Mind becomes forest in Autumn..... //.... Nice poem. I'm glad you are always there with fresh ideas which have multi-layered meanings for the reader. Thanks, Dear Friend.

Of honeyed pain I roam, Your poem speaks of turmoil autumn precede the winter you r thinking of summer any way as the silent autumn to you does bring peace let the coolness help you to find your desired release be at peace PG REMAIN CUSHIONED IN THE THICKEST OF FOREST leafless tis autumn u said