Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Autumnal Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

Wandering a sylvan paradise
we would relish in our colorful world.
We were so happy; us the forest would entice.
Soaking up the cloud's lust,
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Soren Valentine
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Kieran J96 23 January 2013

This is really touching, short but good :) I like how it shows the couple to be nothing compared to the world, yet their love the most important thing, that's my interpretation anyway.

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Aria Siren 10 August 2012

As you already know-I love this poem! Short, sweet and beautiful. The words are lush.

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