Wednesday, January 29, 2014

Autumnal Comments

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I gaze upon these leaves which once were green,
adding such splendour to the verdant scene;
Firm in their footings, dancing in the breeze,
flirtatiously carousing at their ease;
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Thomas Vaughan Jones
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Valerie Dohren 13 February 2014

Spring progresses to Autumn, and we all follow the same journey - youth to old age, when the cycle comes to completion. Another excellent poem Thomas, you never disappoint.

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Elena Sandu 02 February 2014

What a wonderful poem, thank you for share! Yes indeed, out of all seasons the gorgeos autumn will push our feet to run faster through past, present and future times.

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Anthony Burkett 01 February 2014

A wonderfully written composition in rhythmic verse... illustrating life with a comparison to the seasonal changes brought on by nature's cycle... and reminding us that all things on Earth have a single common thread. Touché, Sir Poet!

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Joseph Anderson 30 January 2014

With much use of metaphors, similes and rich imagery you have created a classic write. Very, very good and telling. A great reflection on life in the autumnal days

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