White sunlight sparkling
Through the leaves of the willow,
Dancing on the water flowing by.
The black silhouette of one man fishing,
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Capturing work, Susan...Vivid depiction & mellifluous structure well employed. Solid crafting, young lady! ~ F.j.R. ~
This one is exceptionally beautiful Susan, the flow is perfect and the words weave so well through it. Loved it. Love Ernestine XXX