Autumn Treasure Haiku Comments

They say the awe of nature is reflected in Haiku. You have succeeded so well, the falling and upwards motion and the brown carpet paint a beautiful picture in my mind. 10 Karin Anderson

I like this poem very much! It reminds me of the delights and observations of children.

glints of hope skittering across that brown carpet wonderful

A wonderful haiku.... A real autumn treasure. ' Autumn leaves falling ' and ' Mushrooms spring upward '..... A beautiful contrast....10/10. Regards Naseer

Hello my Haiku Poet...another good one! 10....Ah!