Wednesday, October 4, 2017

Autumn: The Mighty Oak Loses Her "Coat" ….[ Falling Leaves; Fun Inspired By The Poem ‘ Oak Tree ‘ By Elisabeth Anne Wingle] Comments

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Of all the seasons to lose one's coat!
At least she's NOT on a channel ferry boat,
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Bri Edwards
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Beach Girl 19 October 2017

Aww, that's such a cute poem Bri! I will think of it every time I look at the oak tree in my front yard this autumn.

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Paul Brookes 09 October 2017

Oh the strip tease of Autumn great poem so original Me Likes

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Laurie Van Der Hart 09 October 2017

I love your poem, Bri. It's so original even though it was inspired by Oak Tree.... Yours is funnier. What a season to lose one's coat, indeed! Autumn is more spectacular in Europe than in Africa. I'm trying to enjoy it without thinking of the winter chasing behind it. Maybe that's why the tree lost its coat? I've written a few tree poems. One is called, Walnut Tree. And there are two about chestnut trees. Another one coming soon...

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Bharati Nayak 05 October 2017

This inspired poem about Autumn is really a lovely one.It gives me some ideas about Autumn in America.And I also googled to see the Spanish Moss which is not originally a Spanish plant.It does not belong to Moss family either, rather related to the family of pineapple.It got its name from French explorers who thought it resembled like Spanish conquistadors’ long beards.I really enjoyed the poem.

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Eugene Levich 05 October 2017

Very cute, ya big galoot! But what is the it that is being tossed?

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Practicing Poetess 05 October 2017

Wonderful job of personifying the tree, Bri! 'Twas a joy to read! :)

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 04 October 2017

Nicely done, Bri... Intriguingly apropos stanzaic structure...~FjR~

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