Autumn - Tanka Comments

Lovely work........thanks for sharing.....

And beyond 5 Stars! .. Excellently painted picture and feel of autumn! .. And I love the ending lines! ..

These few lines is almost like an awe inspiring book! .. Filled with wonder and beauty! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

Again Oh Wow! .. How beautifully, beautifully and powerfully described! ..

Part1/ I consider autumn the season of poets, it is the season of change and departure, has a great influence on the feeling of poets,

part2/ a human reading of the seasons gives his personal impressions through nature, thank you, our dear poet for your beautiful poetic talents

The birds never dared to fly Colorful leaves gained their wings.

Delightfully vivid and lovely! Autumn at its best.

Colourful leaves gained their wings.Great thought.Allyour very short poems indicate lofty ideas and teaching.

I can see the features of Autumn so clearly through this Tanka.....Super stars

Colourful leaves gained their flight is an expression so beautiful and marvellous

The bitter wind cutting like a knife is so apt and perfect

Wow! Rose, this is a wonderful Tanka.

Beauty of this wonderful short work lies with colourful leaves! A beautiful little poem. Full marks.