Autumn Swing Comments

It is a beautiful poem on Aurumn and life having thrilling expression and groovy collocation based on metaphor. I appreciate this poem and your penmanship. Thank u for sharing this gem.

I especially like the title of this poem Autumn Swing. You wrote this poem just like the moves in a hypnotic dance. The lines blend in so smooth to make for a beautiful write. Life changes just like the seasons. New things come to life as old things dies. There is a constant rebirth as long as the world exists. Nothing ever stays the same, so does life.

a great metaphor very poetic.

Your lovely poetic comparisons and lavish, effective imagery make Autumn Swing a gratifying reading experience. Excellent!

Another very emotive poem that uses strong metaphoric images and colors to entice and challenge the reader. An ingenious blending of many flavors that did not spoil the stew. Great write.

The similes, metaphors are used very nicely.Shades of color denoting the stages of memory are woven nicely..Awesome!

strong, passionate, the hymn of life exploding within and without... the seasons of living and love... well penned!

A vivid dream painted in words... Great poem...

Dear poetess you rocked I say! you have made it wholesome. I like your approach and the development of ideas. 'Time running just like a smoke Dense, smear, disappear' Poem is planned well and drafted well I tried pick some lines very tough job as so many line so fascinating! - especially the implication of colors.. green, yellow..................... Good my mind summoned back to my university days where I studied P.B. Shelly's Ode to Autumn. Good work.10++++++++

Such a very creative and in vivid write, great piece.

Another amazing piece of writing 'Soul! This one sounds more 'Shakespearean! ! With more definition and much more polished though. Nicely written! I gave this one a 10' as well.

This is so good. Great meaning, sad, melancholy yet happy and reflective...loved it my lil bro' -Dr SG! ! ! xoxoxo

This is undoubtedly and undisputedly one of the epic writes of poemhunter and time.An Autumn perhaps never had such an Ode before your words here.I wandered in thoughts and for a moment silence ruled the time while i forgot i actually read it from start to end in each stanzas A to B to C and their coherence so well established in a matured poetic hand...Superb write i must say here..

Great sense of regret apathy and lost....But why do you write the themes? ...Let it be vague to the readers

This is a magnificent poem, with a deep meaning, Very well written! An amazing poem from an amazing poet :)

A good writing to guide the life in a positive way to reach a happiest end. Nice blending of Autumn put the nature within. Thank you. Write more... Regards, pranab

I think this poem's images are very well chosen the seeds, the leaves, the colours Very meaningful

beautiful lines and extensive imagery on a universal topic, Unwritten Soul...

i love the way you have put the feeling from you heart into soft sweet words keep this up are are really good

The description in the end helped understanding the poem...its good you did that. Of all the four season i believe autumn is very unique and so magical..i'm glad you wrote something like this with the flavour of autumn.....Good one unwritten soul...but it could have sound more better than this.