Autumn Sun Comments
Because I feel that
we still love each other
at a distance, I dare
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Part 2. The poem leaves the readers heart pounding faster. How a relationship deteriorates, how the closeness fades! The anxiety of the narrator on the effects of the breaking relationship on the children, the family is so profoundly sketched.
A powerful poem. The gradual buildup of emotions, the inner sobs of the heart culminates in "" In what spring/ will we receive our children / after this winter? ""
I still enjoy this poem very much, best wishes from dreamland, Zywa-Zywa
What a great honour, a poem for me titled AUTUMN SUN, based upon my poem POEM NUMBER 920 " A Song For You" how fascinating Zywa Zywa. How surprising. I am totally dashed by this amazing creation straight from your heart. Most appreciated, admired and enjoyed a very lot. I am deepest entrhalled by this Response upon my poem.. Thank YOU so much, dear. A 10 +++++++++++++ God Bless You.
A MUSE? ! ! ..................Dear. one thiong I never had, is A Muse, IF I may tell you: I am my own Muse. ENJOY LIFE and LOVE!
Rising Autumn Sun Lips of the Spring feel blushing Hails kiss of rebirth
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7/25/2025 10:26:30 AM # 1.0.0
Part 3. Congratulations for such a really poetic write. Top score