Each second leaves fall one by one to ground,
And languidly caress their neighbours one
By one, as if in fond farewell. The sun
Still smiles, but weakly now, as though it’s bound
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What an amazing poem with such vivid imagery and wonderful flow. I love the rhythm in your lines here. Very nice. ~V~
This is an absolutely beautiful poem. I can easily imagine myself being there, as I read your wonderful words. It is quite breathtaking...this poem calms me down and takes me away from reality. Thanks for the comment on my poem as well. -C.Candea
Hey! This is a beautiful one, a pleasure to read. Well done indeed. Love Ernestine
Lovely, Jon. Nice flow and I enjoyed reading. Warmest regards, CJ
Hi Jon! Great stuff, i like your use of language to describe the transition from summer to autumn.
I like this one, it makes want summer to arrive quickely.