Friday, November 18, 2005

Autumn Sonnet Comments

Rating: 4.9

Each second leaves fall one by one to ground,
And languidly caress their neighbours one
By one, as if in fond farewell. The sun
Still smiles, but weakly now, as though it’s bound
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Katie Lowery 06 March 2007

I like this one, it makes want summer to arrive quickely.

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Vanessa Stanwright 03 February 2007

What an amazing poem with such vivid imagery and wonderful flow. I love the rhythm in your lines here. Very nice. ~V~

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Cris K 03 January 2007

This is an absolutely beautiful poem. I can easily imagine myself being there, as I read your wonderful words. It is quite breathtaking...this poem calms me down and takes me away from reality. Thanks for the comment on my poem as well. -C.Candea

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Ernestine Northover 26 November 2005

Hey! This is a beautiful one, a pleasure to read. Well done indeed. Love Ernestine

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Jerry Hughes 19 November 2005

lovely poem Jon, about my favourit season. Well done....

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Cj Heck 18 November 2005

Lovely, Jon. Nice flow and I enjoyed reading. Warmest regards, CJ

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Steve Armstrong 18 November 2005

Hi Jon! Great stuff, i like your use of language to describe the transition from summer to autumn.

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