Monday, January 12, 2009

Autumn Sonnet Comments

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Hues of deep burgundy, the joyous reds
Arrest the tree leaves as they softly fall,
Crying to each other as the blush spreads
And darks the veins. A season call.
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Sonny Rainshine 12 January 2009

Expertly rhymed with well-planned emjambment that keeps it flowing and makes the meter and rhyme sound natural and effective. Traditional patterns such as sonnets are a challenge in modern English. Good job.

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