Friday, September 22, 2017

Autumn's Vacant Lot Comments

Rating: 4.5

The leaves are limp and dry
no laughter in them anymore
watch them fall disappointed
to the woodland floor, brittle and torn
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Robert Creffield
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Chinedu Dike 27 September 2020

Well articulated and nicely brought forth in persuasive expressions with conviction. A brilliant work of art.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2017

No laughter is seen as leaves are dry and limp. Spider web earth is coiled in promise and expectation. Nature greatly impacts mind and thought. Brilliant and thoughtful poem is shared here.10

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