Friday, September 23, 2011

Autumn’s Unholy Dance 2309-2k11 Comments

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Morphing rainbows unmet dally.
Surfeit of colors intrepid vary.
On nature’s will of ceaseless flurry.
To divine cues pander and curry.
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Yasmin Khan 26 June 2013

Flow of thought from 'morphing rainbows' to 'countless furrows' smoothly glides to the culmination. The reader is transported on the wings of visual imagery and with a tinges of philosophy rather it's all philosophical write that can be understood after more than one readings.

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Sam Varghis 30 September 2011

This poem has the 'traditional beauty of poetry' and a philosopy, like your other poems. Beautiful. -Sam

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