Saturday, June 2, 2018

Autumn's Spell Comments

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What verse should I write for you Autumn?
We haven't met yet, spring just stepped in.
Have you taken a rebirth this year?
Or are just continuing the fable you left last year?
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Asavri Dhillon
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Unnikrishnan E S 03 June 2018

Hi Asavri I loved this expression... : : Or, Are y just continuing you fable of last year..: : ,

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Unnikrishnan E S 03 June 2018

Lovely poem. Thoughts on autumn and deep insight into the vagaries of life. Authentic, profound.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 June 2018

Asavri, such a profound poem.....10+++++¥

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Asavri Dhillon 03 January 2021

Thank you

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Asavri Dhillon

Chandigarh, India
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