Autumn's Lips Comments

A spring invitation In beautiful scented scripts....... beautiful and very poetic.. you have an endearing heart. thank u. tony

Great personification 'Autumn's lip' Of his toes winter stands on the tip graging the treetops he reads a letter and suddenly trips... Persian Nightingale, you out did yourself with the poem about autumn...vivid images and a fresh perception. A 10, exponentially

In beautiful scented scripts A message from the ladybird Who lives among the rose hips Rachel Ann Butler

i very much enjoyed this... i absolutely love autumn, i can't wait till august is over so autumn can come.. there's nothing better than new england's fall season... great write!

I love the autumn season. The way the leaves changes colors like our eyes when that certain someone makes us tremble.

This is beautiful metaphor woven into and through your clever wording....... first rate and a 10 from Fay.....

i like it. i've never read a season poem quite like this one. great write.

Autumn is my favorite time of year. I do like your imagery of kissing autumn's lips. I really enjoyed the poem. Well done, my friend, well done. A 10 from me. Richard

autumn is a beautiful days of falling maples I like it and I also like your poem.. great! !

Delightfully clever...I appreciate your poetic voice... Dorothy C.

A highly poetic and exalted autumn. Its sweetness lingers on in my mind. CP

A delightful poem, 'great rime an blend', wonderfully depicted this message you send! Best wishes Shiraz! *10*! ! Friend Thad

I love this one also Very beautiful Thanks for sharing -Brie

Beautiful lines for the favourite seasons in our hearts, Thanks for sharing the Contemporary important Work, With Prays and Regards, (Vinod)

Very well done...thank you for this one

good imagery kissing autumn's lips -10 anju

Very lovely and charming! 10