Thursday, December 11, 2008

Autumn's Lips Comments

Rating: 3.1

Of his toes
Winter stands on the tips
Grazing the treetops
He reads a letter and
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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE
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Dr Antony Theodore 28 December 2018

A spring invitation In beautiful scented scripts....... beautiful and very poetic.. you have an endearing heart. thank u. tony

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 24 November 2009

Great personification 'Autumn's lip' Of his toes winter stands on the tip graging the treetops he reads a letter and suddenly trips... Persian Nightingale, you out did yourself with the poem about autumn...vivid images and a fresh perception. A 10, exponentially

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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009

In beautiful scented scripts A message from the ladybird Who lives among the rose hips Rachel Ann Butler

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sky dreams 28 July 2009

i very much enjoyed this... i absolutely love autumn, i can't wait till august is over so autumn can come.. there's nothing better than new england's fall season... great write!

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Marla Speece 15 July 2009

I love the autumn season. The way the leaves changes colors like our eyes when that certain someone makes us tremble.

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Fay Slimm 13 March 2009

This is beautiful metaphor woven into and through your clever wording....... first rate and a 10 from Fay.....

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Alexander Hale 07 March 2009

i like it. i've never read a season poem quite like this one. great write.

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C.R. Clark 21 December 2008

Autumn is my favorite time of year. I do like your imagery of kissing autumn's lips. I really enjoyed the poem. Well done, my friend, well done. A 10 from me. Richard

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Little Morning Star 21 December 2008

autumn is a beautiful days of falling maples I like it and I also like your poem.. great! !

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Delightfully clever...I appreciate your poetic voice... Dorothy C.

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C. P. Sharma 19 December 2008

A highly poetic and exalted autumn. Its sweetness lingers on in my mind. CP

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Thad Wilk 17 December 2008

A delightful poem, 'great rime an blend', wonderfully depicted this message you send! Best wishes Shiraz! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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I love this one also Very beautiful Thanks for sharing -Brie

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Vinod Kumar 16 December 2008

Beautiful lines for the favourite seasons in our hearts, Thanks for sharing the Contemporary important Work, With Prays and Regards, (Vinod)

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Sarah Sisson 13 December 2008

Very well done...thank you for this one

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Anjali Sinha 12 December 2008

good imagery kissing autumn's lips -10 anju

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M M 12 December 2008

Very lovely and charming! 10

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