Tuesday, January 3, 2012

Autumn's Fallen Leaves Comments

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As the opalescent mist ebbs away,
Strewing the leaves in diamond bright array
With dew that at dawn did tenderly pose,
Wherein sunlight would find congenial repose.
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Jaime Montanez Salcedo
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Unwritten Soul 17 January 2012

Different tones, multiple colors like when it is autumn, you done it colorful around... i love the line you end the poem Which fades away, like the fallen leaves would go. which concludes some meaning, to life to ponder on..keep writing, artistry poet should write continuously! _Unwritten Soul

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