Monday, April 6, 2009

Autumn’s Dance Comments

Rating: 4.9

The leaves were slowly falling
So very slowly and dropping
Ever so gently like a butterfly
Which glides and is also seen flirting,
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Angelina Pandian
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Nimal Dunuhinga 21 April 2011

Excellent dance for the coming Winter!

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Ken E Hall 23 February 2010

Lovely autumn poem dancing leaves such a wonderful time of the year as you have constructed in superb imagery thanks+++++10 regards

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Pamela Lutwyche 16 February 2010

This is poetry in motion. I love the way you have written this. I could see those leaves being butterflies.

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Spiritwind Wood 04 October 2009

nicely written, makes me miss summer already

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Rakesh Bedi 29 September 2009

To me this poem depicts a very minute sense of observation of the poet. All of us must have watched this happening some time or other. But, dear, it was you who scripted it so beautifully. I must say, you are a very keen observer, angel!

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Mubeen Sadhika 07 August 2009

Soft. Beautiful expressions.

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rago rago 20 July 2009

autumn is the season nice always to remember for joy........ perfect expressions......

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Yelena M. 03 July 2009

Autumn is always associated for me first and foremost with dance of yellow leaves across the streets...Your poem is a unique and exquisite expression, thanks very much for sharing with us. Best wishes. A.

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Kesav Easwaran 02 July 2009

nice imaginative ideas breezing inside a poetic mind...good work Leena...thanks

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a lovely dance well pictured...the breeze shows up in the leaf...lovely

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Indira Renganathan 12 June 2009

A good observation on nature...picturesque....by the way did you use my poems...regards...Indira

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 27 May 2009

pictural poem, beautiful thanks for sharing

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premji premji 15 May 2009

autumn season....it's a season of death and rebirth......old leaves are gone...new buds are coming up..............

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Saadat Tahir 13 April 2009

whew...! soft an slick.....atonce silky an sad much like life itself you r a natural keep penning....will be hearing from me more often im new to the forum tc saadat

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