The leaves were slowly falling
So very slowly and dropping
Ever so gently like a butterfly
Which glides and is also seen flirting,
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Lovely autumn poem dancing leaves such a wonderful time of the year as you have constructed in superb imagery thanks+++++10 regards
This is poetry in motion. I love the way you have written this. I could see those leaves being butterflies.
To me this poem depicts a very minute sense of observation of the poet. All of us must have watched this happening some time or other. But, dear, it was you who scripted it so beautifully. I must say, you are a very keen observer, angel!
autumn is the season nice always to remember for joy........ perfect expressions......
Autumn is always associated for me first and foremost with dance of yellow leaves across the streets...Your poem is a unique and exquisite expression, thanks very much for sharing with us. Best wishes. A.
nice imaginative ideas breezing inside a poetic mind...good work Leena...thanks
a lovely dance well pictured...the breeze shows up in the leaf...lovely
A good observation on nature...picturesque....by the way did you use my poems...regards...Indira
autumn season....it's a season of death and rebirth......old leaves are gone...new buds are coming up..............
whew...! soft an slick.....atonce silky an sad much like life itself you r a natural keep penning....will be hearing from me more often im new to the forum tc saadat
Excellent dance for the coming Winter!