Wednesday, April 8, 2009

Autumn's Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

Spinning! Dancing!
Floating, falling!
Crunching under my feet
With the Glorious Announcement
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Devin Tudor 07 May 2009

This is great! I love it! ! ! you shold def. get some of these published =) is Autumn your favorite season?

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Rebekah Arwood 23 April 2009

Nicey nice! I have to agree with Caro. That is definitely my favorite part too! =D Well done!

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Caroline Weeks 09 April 2009

'Breathe in the Sting of the cold Crisp air Poignant with the memories of Years past. Let the chill caress your face And give yourself in to Autumn's Dance.' My favorite part! Superlatively put. :) I love autumn and this poem captures how I feel about it perfectly! Good work. Caroline

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Rosalita Fernandez 08 April 2009

Captured the imagry of autumn (fall) so well, people moan about it, but if they look like you have its actually beautifull, well done perfect 10!

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