Friday, November 4, 2016

Autumn's Court Comments

Rating: 5.0

Heavy mist presence, extend your scepter;
Horn of power, autumn!
I see you holding court,
calling to attention your realm.
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Kathy Van Kurin
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Your personification of Autumn is beautiful...a ten..

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Bill Cantrell 14 December 2016

Very smooth with elegant wording, true poetry! !

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Kathy Van Kurin 18 December 2016

Bill Cantrell, Smooth, that is a nice thing to hear. I am listening...............elegant.........so nice to hear. My heart is helped by your positive input. It's funny how different people see different things and I just love that! Bye, bye. Blessings to you. Kathy

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Susan Williams 12 December 2016

This is so very vivid that I feel like I can close my eyes and see myself surrounded by all those leaves- -much nicer than all this snow and ice I am actually surrounded by! I would love to see you write a poem about snow and ice- -and post it in summertime when it is over 100 degrees outside. Well-done approach to this theme also makes this poem unique as well as the colorful vibrant images! ! ! Took 23 minutes to get PH to post this comment.

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Kathy Van Kurin 18 December 2016

Susan Williams, I know that many deal with snow in the winter- not always so fun! I live in the Pacific Northwest of Oregon, Willamette valley. We are even getting colder weather then used to for December. So this was a satisfying poem to write and it is nice to think that anyone understands what I am trying to say- you just never know. So Thank you, thank you, thank you for your informative and kind review. It is these contacts that make it kind of nice putting our stuff out before others. Bless your life and writing and Merry Christmas. Kathy

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Clarence Prince 07 December 2016

Twirling the whirlwind We gaze after them in joy Fall to winter, they still dance Nature, who can understand? Just the Holy God alone!

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Valsa George 02 December 2016

'Flashing banners wave! Gilded leaf confetti falling.'............ Arresting picture of Autumn! Your poem documents so well the transition from Autumn to Winter! There is no sense of loss expressed but new anticipations and fresh hopes! A lovely write picturing Nature in all her splendor!

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Kathy Van Kurin 02 December 2016

This one was building within my soul for some time. I was driving one day and color, texture and skies just became a slowy forming picture of royalty. I am please to know that you liked it! A very satisfying poem to write. Thanks again for your thoughtful review. Bless you so much Valsa George. Kathy

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Bharati Nayak 18 November 2016

A brilliant piece of writing- - - - -A vivid picture of Autumn's majestic beauty- - Nature's procession from Autumn to Winter- - - All so nicely expressed through beautiful words.

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Kathy Van Kurin 22 November 2016

Bharati, The seasons enclosed within each season or our earth's natural world just have myriads of meaning. There is so much to write about. Your kind words are just nice to read; thanks for reading and coming by. Blessings, Kathy

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Kim Barney 11 November 2016

Beautiful picture to go with a very nice poem. Well done!

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Kathy Van Kurin 15 November 2016

Kim Barney, I appreciate your positive words. I never run out of subject matter when it comes to the our-of-doors. Blessings kathy

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 November 2016

Coalesces within! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kathy Van Kurin 15 November 2016

Edward Kofi Louis, thanks! It was so fun to write. Blessings to you Kathy

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Kathy Van Kurin 05 November 2016

The picture here is near my home in the Pacific Northwest of the United States. This scene depicts the last golden rays lending their glorious last rays of Autumn.

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Chan Mongol 05 November 2016

So meaningful the poem is! So beautifully the poem was constructed by a skilled hand! The poed is so rich in her thoughts! She perfectly named the poem as the Autumn's court! As a reader I am so amazed with rich words of the poet to decorate her noble work in this poem. I adore nature lovers! Thank you very much for sharing.

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Kathy Van Kurin 05 November 2016

Chan Mongol, The reality of God's creation is alive. The Lord's voice can be heard as He speaks to our need, hurt or just wants to let us know He is there with us. I see so much of God's majesty in his masterpiece. Thank you for your input and kind encouragement. Blessings to you. Kathy

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