Saturday, September 26, 2015

Autumn's Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

I look out my window and see
Little children in the leaves
Romping like puppies
Arms covered in warm sleeves.
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Marilyn Lott
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Rajnish Manga 26 September 2015

It is when you absorb the spirit of change in season, you churn out a piece of poetry- so sweet and so adorable. The portrayal of autumn is lively like the children Throwing the brilliant leaves Straight up to the sky and- Giggles from these precious kids Smiles on faces replace frowns.

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