The wind swirls leaves in all directions,
Tumbling them down upon this earth,
Releasing them from their connections,
To inhabit yet another berth.
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gorgeous scene, Ernestine. in complete agreement with all below and likely above. marvelous beauty in your autumn portrait of change, hope and rebirth. commanding work. -Tailor
All our beautiful fall colors are gone today, and as I drove to the Library, the leaves swirled and danced in the road after my car! Great writing!
Hi Ernestine... I really enjoyed this poem of hope... and needed to read it today All my best CJ
Beautiful. A quiet but lovely picture you've painted with your words. -chuck
This is a warmly painted, elegantly flowing piece about the most hauntingly beautiful season of the year. I love your last two lines in particular. They serve as a perfect cadence to round off the poem. affectionately, Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Dear Ernestine, This is so beautiful, it's imagery conveys such a powerful naturally soothing grace and peace. Thank YOU! ! Debora
an awesome penning, imagery so vivid in colour and feeling. excellent. amanda
Absolutely gorgeous & virtually flawless verse, young lady...Where does your Spectrum of Talent end....Or does it? ! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''F. j. R.
This is your finest work Ernestine, it holds a feeling quite unparallel to any of your other pieces, and although this is my own opinion I feel that many others may find themselves thinking the same, a truly remarkable accomplishment Thankyou..you amazingly strong and brilliant poet of the heart Love duncan X
Beautiful imagery again Ernestine, you really are a very talented poet. Love Andrew x