That deserted autumn after you died,
I took a walk to the bank
It was warm, but predicting rain
I was becoming wet with perspiration
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The rhythm of solitude of Autumn captured in a very beautiful song. Congratulations, LeeAnn. Top score, no doubt!
A poignant and emotionally stirring work, autumn is a time if thoughtful reflection. Ive lost a family member this year so ive had time to think. Bravo LeeAnn
Brilliant blend of nostalgia, longing and loss. One of your finest poems, LeeAnn.
Our life stories sometimes go with what is in our mind, emotions, day to day occurrences mingled with the rhythm of nature. Beautiful and touching poem with wonderful images.Top Marks.
Autumn rhythm expressed through such beauty and elegance. Marvellous LeeAnn....10
I can feel your joy in watching the fall of leaves! Magnificent expression with fathomless poetic beauty! Bravo! !
Autumn's rain is never far away, weather are the doughnuts it seems! ! A good 5* poem that makes me feel hungry for doughnuts! !
Such a glorious work.....wonderful to read....