Saturday, November 13, 2021

Autumn Rhythm Comments

Rating: 5.0

That deserted autumn after you died,
I took a walk to the bank
It was warm, but predicting rain
I was becoming wet with perspiration
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Anjandev Roy 09 October 2022

Such a glorious work.....wonderful to read....

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The rhythm of solitude of Autumn captured in a very beautiful song. Congratulations, LeeAnn. Top score, no doubt!

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Richard Wlodarski 21 May 2022

Love the poem. Especially, the last line!

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Kevin Patrick 18 November 2021

A poignant and emotionally stirring work, autumn is a time if thoughtful reflection. Ive lost a family member this year so ive had time to think. Bravo LeeAnn

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M.J. Lemon 17 November 2021

Brilliant blend of nostalgia, longing and loss. One of your finest poems, LeeAnn.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 November 2021

Our life stories sometimes go with what is in our mind, emotions, day to day occurrences mingled with the rhythm of nature. Beautiful and touching poem with wonderful images.Top Marks.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 November 2021

Autumn rhythm expressed through such beauty and elegance. Marvellous LeeAnn....10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 November 2021

I can feel your joy in watching the fall of leaves! Magnificent expression with fathomless poetic beauty! Bravo! !

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 14 November 2021

Sad and lovely, with very pleasing imagery.5 stars.

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David Wood 13 November 2021

Autumn's rain is never far away, weather are the doughnuts it seems! ! A good 5* poem that makes me feel hungry for doughnuts! !

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Kostas Lagos 13 November 2021

A melancholic poem with a twist og humour! Lovely

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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