Thursday, September 26, 2013

Autumn Reflections Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun shines in mellow mists, autumn leaves,
Pastel hues in the air float.

Beneath the pool’s surface is touched
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Yasmin Khan
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Farah Ilyas 07 October 2013

in ripples...though love emerged in form of waves instantaneously but the effect of beautiful scenery in our mind is long lasting....beautiful composition: -)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 01 October 2013

Poet's ability to capture the tiny ripples formed by a fallen leaf of love. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Ken E Hall 01 October 2013

Beautiful autumn reflections picture loves tenderness with ripples of the heart...just lovely...regards

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Shahzia Batool 29 September 2013

For your pen I can say with confidence that you not only compose a poem but paint a picture... pastel hues are in perfect harmony with autumnal touch! ! !

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Valsa George 29 September 2013

Nice analogy...! Though a small poem, it has an inescapable charm. Enjoyed!

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Sallam Yassin 27 September 2013

every fallen leaf a word of love in heart who fallen in your love the pain in nature of your love

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 26 September 2013

A stone into the pond Valerie has given rippling in the heart nice one thank you

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Valerie Dohren 26 September 2013

A beautiful sentiment expressed here Yasmeen, a word of love creating ripples in the heart.

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