Thursday, October 8, 2015

Autumn Paradise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fall’s arrived in autumn’s fashion
And the senior floras
Graduated
Wearing the collegiate insignias
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Kevin Patrick
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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2015

Fashion of Autumn is brilliantly observed and painted in canvas of words. Very amazing composition that wins mind of a reader. Excellent...10

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Mj Lemon 16 October 2015

Land salmon and overripe Eden....I am reminded of Heaney. Your work has always been amazing... but it just does get better and better.

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Lorraine Colon 09 October 2015

What a lovely poem about Autumn's beauty and allure. But what stands out is this phrase: October is a keyhole in heaven's backyard. We can peek through this keyhole and catch a glimpse of the heaven that lies beyond. Without a doubt, Autumn is one of Nature's finest gifts, wrapped in ribbons of dazzling color. I truly enjoyed reading this fine poem.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 08 October 2015

And I know if I were to die Seeing the world beyond the light It would lead me into An Autumn Paradise Verily, a fine imagery of Autumn, similitude of a heavenly paradise. Loved reading and commenting ...........................10

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