Autumn Of The Year 1988 Comments

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Each and every word of the poem is filled with joy, beauty, amazement, songs and symphony. When the harshness of summers ebbs and warmth of autumn takes over, one is struck by the thought whether the autumn could last for ever along with the pleasures it brings with it? It was indeed a pleasure to have read the poem, Jasbirji.

I don't know why the autumn of 1988 was so important to you, but that is something personal. It's too hot nowadays and autumn is eagerly awaited. The poem is so beautiful that it helped in removing the pains of the hot summer at a place where there is no electricity for at least 8 hours during one day, yes three times a day we remain victim of energy shortage. Some times this duration is even more due to break downs.

The haunting memory of a bygone autumn is thus recorded nicely]Good job!

but why? the autumn comes every year. any way good expression with full of grammar. i like it really. one more question, why not the spring? keep writing. full marks.

Twenty-one years ago, and such vivid memories...especially those which brought you much joy...something happened..Good for you. Well expressed, Jasbir.. Cheers. Subroto

Joyful poem with lovely imagery,10++

To have lived such an exceptional day and to be able to keep it forever in a poem. We wordsmiths are very blessed and lucky people.Thanks for sharing. Kindest regards, Sandra Fowler