Tuesday, May 22, 2012

Autumn My Dear Comments

Rating: 3.5

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Autumn my dear!
Thy winds are cool and sharp
And are mine to embrace
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Ryan C. Walker
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Adeline Foster 14 September 2012

Good poem. I liked the way you numbered the sections, but especially how you used personal dialog. Read mine - Hand Haying - Adeline

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Valerie Dohren 23 May 2012

Beautiful poem, very descriptive and well penned.

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Godfrey Morris 22 May 2012

Lovely poem had a very relaxing flow

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Ryan C. Walker

Ryan C. Walker

Miami, Florida
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