Autumn Mist Comments
autumn mist, cool drops of fine moisture- within mystery's
curtain; natural is this beauty.
Precious charms now here as God brings forth nature's
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I wish you had used punctuation. The poem would have read better that way. That last stanza does need a dose of punctuation. The meaning is somewhat unclear. You do have a talent for writing poetry.
Tomas Prato, It is good to know that we all are learning. Your input is received and I will keep learning for you have challenged me. Thanks for taking some time to read a poem of mine. Blessings to you in your writing this December. Kathy
Precious charms now here and God brings forth His loveliness to awaken our hearts to Him. True words, also a lovey poem and photo! Thanks for sharing, Kathy!
Clarence Prince, Where do we find inspiration? I think that God knows we need it and allows us to hear His voice through the masterpiece of His handiwork of the heavens and earth. We are fit to do so I think. You are good to give me your input on anything I may set my pen too. It is a vulnerable world we live in and any positivity means so much. God bless you this special Christmas season. Kathy
Thankyou Clarence Prince, I hope this line finds you well and learning all God has for you. Thank you for a great review, it was heland encouraging. Nature does teach us much! Many blessings to you. katyy
Oh! ! ! Kathy, Love The Way This Poem Dances Across The Reader Mind! ! ! ! ! Beautiful Painting! ! ! ! ! Love The Autumn Mist! ! ! ! ! Many Tens! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Adding To Favorites ! ! ! ! !
Rebecca Navarre, Will we ever run out of delights to ponder within our wonderful natural world? I still am in awe and hope it never grows old. How can it? Your review is so kind and helpful.It is always nice to know that our poems our read and liked even a little by others; don't you think? Well, I wish you every blessing of this CHRIST-mas season! Kathy
Your poem paints beautiful colors of Autumn and I am in awe of this wonderful painting.
Autumn does seem mysterious in that it's beauty comes on vividly but gradually. Everywhere as you have pointed out it is like a painting. Thanks so much for taking the time to read. Blessings to you in your life and writing Kathy
I really enjoyed your poem. So lively! Your way to picture the Autumn proves your great skill in the art to construct good poems. Keep it up, my kind friend. You said.......Glimpses of vivid color; orange, yellow, cream, crimson-the trees bear the traces and memory of summer's sunshine as the cool days of fall set in......... and I say, WOW! Surely, I will rate this 10. Thanks for sharing.....Chan Mongol
Chan Mongol, Isn't color wonderful within a process of natural time! ? Still I am so pleased with your ability to really read my humble work. I feel that I can keep trying..................Sincerly Kathy
I like your description of the changing color of leaves being THE MEMORY OF SUMMER'S SUNSHINE, past and present times collapse into each other in that image. And your list of colors is surprising: orange, yellow, cream, crimson: a whole month goes by as leaves take on these colors! You enlarge the meaning of autumn in the final stanza suggesting the season itself is a mysterious source of wisdom. I'm convinced of it!
Daniel Brick, Clever and intuitive; I am always floored when anyone can begind to see where I am coming from as this is not complicated writing. Oh bless you for this timly encouraging input. I look forward to more of your work as well thanks again Kathy
Wow! ! ! ... Nice composition about the beauty of nature from a good poet like you, Kathy......
Dernard F. Asuncion, I always hope people will be inspired by the simplicity of my writing. I guess that to me God's creation is best simply enjoyed for just what it is as we just dwell in its peace. Hope you find peace and grace in your life. Thankyou for taking the time to read Autum's Mist. Blessings to you.............Kathy
Bernard F. Asuncion, Beauty and nature do seem to go hand in hand and to me the simplicity is why we need it. My writing is not long or complicated but it simply is. I always am flabbergasted when anyone respond kindly and hope that people feel the peace I do from the experence that inspires the simple poem. Thankyou for your very kind response! .......Blessings to you.............................Kathy
Eduard Kofi Louis, thank you for dropping by and reading. I truly enjoyed writing this one. I always am re-energized by the natural world. It inspires a spirit of gratitude within this life! . Blessings like always to you........................................Kathy
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7/24/2025 10:14:07 PM # 1.0.0
fall is still our clue for its beauty hides in mystery like the lessons of life yet unseen- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -I have to say I like how those lines swirled around and around like a leaf spiraling down from a tree..... you haven't written lately- -I hope all is well with you and I want you to know that I've read most of your poems and I am a very voracious reader and I want more of your poems! ! ! I would like you to take me along for another walk through your city streets- - your technique totally shines
Susan Williams, Thanks so much for your kind efforts and words to read and comment on this poem. I havn't been here in awhile. It is funny though that when someone such as yourself responds as you have the encouragement is really lovely. Guess I feel a little more motivated. Funny how seeing something through another's eyes in your above review has inspired me! Thank you, thank you, thank you!