Saturday, March 14, 2009

Autumn Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I met her in the autumn;
When such are found, you know.
She said, 'In all her glory.'
Though joking, oh how so!
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Cristy Upshaw 17 April 2009

Such beauty within your words. I love the title and your words and imagery always a delightful endeavor. Autumn Love, amongst the beauty of the leaves and the slight breeze, kisses so alive and fresh. Magnificent work.

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Vaibhav Pandey 27 March 2009

beautiful poem sir...a treat to read...10

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Juneil Sechico 27 March 2009

nice piece! i enjoyed readin it

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Madison Yeater 26 March 2009

wow..these lines impacted me so strongly! ! ! An autumn love, so firmly, May grasp a loving heart; It still may seem together, Though broken from the start. i love the image this gives.. its a great, light poem to read for enjoyment, or for the content of the heart. =)

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Inday Prising 24 March 2009

i love how you used the seasons to describe how the wonders and troubles of love..hehe..

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Swagathnath Rajeswari 22 March 2009

When i started to got to school and to take today annual examination, i looked into the poem hunter. Give and take is the right policy learnt today. Autumn love is fine but love never stops at autumn summer is hot, winter is cold, in rain it pours like the drops from us...But i like the way you have expressed.

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Sid John Gardner. 22 March 2009

Not too shabby. Sid

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Ted Sheridan 22 March 2009

You should make a great living writing your own 'Brand' of cards.

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Love knows no season or reason and true love transcends all feelings and conquors all.

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Mamta Agarwal 22 March 2009

An autumn love.... broken from the start. very moving poem, love and its facets 10 mamta

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James Nall 20 March 2009

once again, another 10! ! ! ! ! ! you never cease to amaze the humble poets, my friend.thank you for a lovely write

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Allan Macli Borges 20 March 2009

“So when the tears of springtime Give way and summer looms The autumn love, once tempting Ignores the soul it dooms”. sometimes seems that feeelings have no feelings, they don't care what them can do with us... brilliant piece.

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amazing greenwolfe you've left me quite speechless i daresay it was an amazing peace and the rhythm and rhyme styling you spoke of in your biography has drawn me to it, it canter has a almost seductive sense to it or at least it did to me Timothy Weiermann

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Myrtle Thomas 19 March 2009

This is absolutely beautiful i couldn't wait to get to the next stanza.I felt the feelings very visual. a 10

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Telli Med Ridha 18 March 2009

i really like it, autumn is the best season and the words you write gave the big value of this season, thank you so much my dear poet.

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Duh Huh 17 March 2009

Your talent never ceases to amaze me. This is poetry in all its glory. Thank you so very much for sharing your talent with this humble reader, another one for my favs and a definite 10.

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Stephen Stirk 17 March 2009

Rhyme and rythmn are vastly underated in poetry. One again. this is a wonderful poem in traditonal style with grand delivery and eloquence. There isn't any break in the line balance. A masterful piece Steve

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Andrew Blakemore 17 March 2009

Wonderful poetry, great rhyme and flow, a real gem! Best wishes, Andrew

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Shekhar Joshi 16 March 2009

ohh i liked it from start right till the end the word flow and rhyme scheme is perfect as usual good work

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Ency Bearis 16 March 2009

I enjoyed reading this poem, nice to read, well written and lovely.

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