Autumn Leaves Comments

The leaves rustle and bustle
 Far away the golden sun shines
 The ripe tree leaves
 begin to fall, to cover the streets
 Nature spreads the carpet
 of orange, brown, yellow and red
 Musky perfume and the whispers. very poetic dear Rini. tony

Very pleasant autumnal poem Rini...it delights the senses!

Hi Rini, Very lively write. Loved this one: 
The autumn leaves make themselves known
 It is their musky perfume
 That whispers to the chirping birds, 
 It will rain before the dusk, and that is my word.
 My heart goes to to the marvellous series of imagery.

A fantastic expression has been made on autumn. So nice to read. Wonderful imagery. Amusing and interesting. Thanks for sharing.

Autumn Leaves............... in so many poems created, so many words consecrated but IF I may tell you, dear Rini no autumn is such endearing as your brevity due to your constant loveliest smile on your face I repeat to you, this is no race.......................Thank you so much for sharing this beauty. A 10++++++++++++Vote

This is a very wonderful and a very creative poem with great imagery.